Sand Dance #FridayFotoFiction

He held out his hand

And she grasped at it  tightly

while he led her to the sand

at the edge of the water where they


As they twirled and they swirled , flung their shoes in the air with wild abandon.

Tossed jacket aside,

Wind tousled hair and song in their hearts

Their feet tapped to the beat of a different drummer.

Salty sea sprays , and sand in their toes as they wiggled and wriggled

Exhilerated , once more to be a girl and a boy

He laughed and she giggled

As they looked over their shoulders

At the people they’d left behind at their wedding reception.

Image of Bellybytes

This is my take on this week’s #FridayFotoFiction prompt hosted by Tina and Sirmiri. 


A granny who always sees the humour in life and tries to do things differently. When others make cupcakes, this granny makes banana fritters. When she’s not busy chasing her grandchildren who love making her run around, she indulges in her passions of reading, writing, meeting friends and watching movies. And somewhere between all this she enjoys travelling and cooking!

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16 Responses

  1. I couldn’t stop smiling reading every word. Wonderful <3

  2. I loved this! Their attitude and the take on the prompt!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction , Sunita!:)
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  3. Akshata says:

    Thats a wonderful way of making one’s marriage memorable!
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  4. Rashi Mital says:

    Oh how I wish every couple gets to do this. I feel in a wedding the couple getting married is one the who least enjoys it. Naice take.
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  5. Truly cupid struck! Wish they remain forever, madly in love with each other! A crisp, lovely tale!
    Secretly I wish… I should have done something like this! But cant imagine dancing in 9 yards though… hahaha!
    Fantastic take on the prompt Sunita! You made me jealous…

  6. Natasha says:

    Awwww sweet!
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  7. Lavanya says:

    I know that boy and girl 🙂 What a sweet take on the prompt.

  8. Meha says:

    This was a beautiful story. Great writing, so poetic.

  9. Tina Basu says:

    aww they are so cute. Lovely story.
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